Jasmine Hart

Tempest Tempest was worn out by the time she got home. Settling the dogs down for the night, she tugged off her shoes and, leaving them by the door, headed ...

I thought it might be nice to have a thread where people could talk (type?) about how they fared, and if they'd do something like this again, and what they ...

Ok...I'm so tired it's not even funny. Haven't even started the story that I intended to write this month and I meant to read a collection of poetry today as ...

Another haiku from yesterday...I'll try to make today's count... Evening's elation is eternally ecliped. I'm rotting outwards.

Thanks a million you two. I'll look at editing later this week. Here's yesterday's...it's only a measly haiku as I didn't get home until after eleven... I never pictured the ...

April 26: I really love this one. The flow is great, and I love the imagery, especially; "You, who are the clarinet, lying forgotten on the music stand." The tone ...

27: This is good and flows well. I really love the last line, and the third. I'm not sure about the fourth line, it sounds a little forced. Maybe try ...

Fri: Colour Me Permanent Colour me permanent- no transgressionary traveller taking one bed tonight and fading by morning, pockets full of pictures of the dead, and my siblings before they ...

Thurs: Splash of wine seeping into one-flow blood, sluggish, sluggish, now removed from friends and libraries, receptions, poetry, each butterfly net for serious thought, and it's far too cold to ...

Thought I typed my poem into my phone...but it doesn't seem to be there now...perhaps I deleted it by accident. Did I write one? :?

MONDAY Eyes snap open. Aching chest. This time I'm sure it's not heartbreak or sympathy pangs, storming across in formation, then resting by my heart to set up tent, stakes ...

April 20th; I really love this one. The story is interesting, the tone is appropriate, and it flows well. I especially enjoyed; "I am jealous as a child is jealous, ...

7: I think that the beginning is a little week. Maybe reduce the narrator's presence and do a sort of close up of the man by way of introduction. I ...

I'm floudering a bit, Kit. Any idea how many posts I'll need to make before Tempest is found? Also, does she need to be anywhere specific in order to be ...

Thanks Kit. Love ya. Ok...lacking in time...how about we set some sort of quota or loose timetable...like a post or two a week...doesn't have to be long? JFW, about the ...